Great job Jasmine, you’ve put a lot of effort into this presentation. You have a very good amount of facts and statistics to back up your argument, and your backgrounds suit the theme of this presentation. You may however want to refrain from using words such as “bad”, as they are a little simplistic. I also believe that we should take care of our world, rather than destroying it. How and where did you obtain all of these facts?
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Great job Jasmine, you’ve put a lot of effort into this presentation. You have a very good amount of facts and statistics to back up your argument, and your backgrounds suit the theme of this presentation. You may however want to refrain from using words such as “bad”, as they are a little simplistic. I also believe that we should take care of our world, rather than destroying it. How and where did you obtain all of these facts?
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