Hello Jasmine I really enjoyed your slideshow on your trip to america, I liked hearing about all your wonderful adventures. Next time to make it even better you could check your punctuation and spelling. But overall it was a fun and interesting slideshow keep it up. Sincerely Holly
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Hello Jasmine
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your slideshow on your trip to america, I liked hearing about all your wonderful adventures. Next time to make it even better you could check your punctuation and spelling. But overall it was a fun and interesting slideshow keep it up.
Sincerely
Holly
Hi Jazz,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your slideshow, your really lucky to have gone to America. I went to Grenada a few weeks ago.
Anyway bye
Willow